Halil AKGÜN
VOKI:
http://www.voki.com/pickup.php?scid=6009181&height=267&width=200
XTRANORMAL:
http://www.xtranormal.com/profile/8077440/?published=true
AVIARY:
http://advanced.aviary.com/artists/Akgun/creations/music
TIMETOAST:
http://www.timetoast.com/timelines/charlie-chaplin--6
TOONDOO:
http://www.toondoo.com/cartoon/4899122
E-PORTFOLIO :
STORYJUMPER:
http://www.storyjumper.com/book/index/5489192/The-Selfish-Man
AUDIOBOO:
http://audioboo.fm/boos/785709-mother-s-day
PHOTOSTORY 1:
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xql58d_the-trip_tech
PHOTOSTORY 2:
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xql5as_toy-store_tech
voki is good and informative
ReplyDeleteconversation between mother and teache rin xtranormal is good and well organized.
I couldnot open your projects and videos in e-portfolio. I think there is a problem, ı am not sure..
For audiboo, if you speak more enthusiastically, i think it will be better. because you give information about mothers' day. but the other projects are all good..thank you :)
conversation between teacher and mother is well animated.. there is no problem in your voki and timetoast is ok... but I also couldn t open videos in your portfoio... ı like your stories for kids but you can add music and make them talk more lively... the rest of your project is all good. thanks for your labour.
ReplyDeleteAviary is a creative one. timetoast is meaningful and good one. there is a techniacal problem with xtranormal speaking ones are not seen. you should add bigraphy on e portfolio. stories are good maybe youı should use text to speech programs or a better recording device. tank you :D
ReplyDeleteVoki is really informative for students to teach adjectives describing people's appearance. In xtranormal, there are some problems in characters' motions. For instance, while the teacher is talking the camera shows the student's mother. Timetoast and toondoo are good. In e-portfolio, I couln't open the things you have loaded. In audioboo, your intonation goes on at the same speed. You should have talked lively. Your second photostory is good, as it teaches toys to kids. The child hears the word and sees its written form. Thanks(:
ReplyDeleteThe voki is a nice idea and the students can study further with that. But in the xtranormal are some grammatical mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHalil I think you forgot to publish your e-portfolio after you were completely finished. with the projects you used your voice, please use your intonation and avoid grammar mistakes. Still, good job!
ReplyDeleteI think you should work over your pronunciation and intonation a little bit because it is a bit hard to catch what you'r saying in the audios and videos. The rest is ok. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI only used my voice in audiboo. others are not my real voice, they were prepared by computers with some programmes.))
Deleteı like your topic selection for storyjumper and photostory1. you should make your intonation better.thanks for you job halil
ReplyDeletewish you had your own photo on your website =)) ın your xtranormal video, there seems to be problem about camera positions, but the topic is good :D
ReplyDeleteYour storyjumper and voki is rather well but your e portfolio is a bit problematic, I could not open your projects.Also,your second photostory is nice, thanks :)
ReplyDeleteYour projects are good. but in your xtranormal project, there is a problem about camera positions. ıt could be better.
ReplyDeleteın general, they are well-prepared.